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Alice Sudlow, Editor

Alice helps authors of YA novels craft un-put-down-able stories with proven editing strategies and infectious love for the editing process. Get one expert editing tip in your inbox every week.

Why You Must Show Time Passing in Your Novel

Hi Reader, How do you make time pass? Well, when you’re living your regular life in the real world, you don’t have to do anything. Time is constantly passing, no matter what you do. And when a timer goes off, or you look outside and see the sun’s gone down, or you feel your stomach growl with hunger, you notice time has passed. You hardly have to think about it. It’s just happening, all around you, all the time. In your novel, though—well, there, you are responsible for charting the passage...
5 days ago • 1 min read

What You Need to Know When the Editing Gets Hard

Hi Reader, I just got back from a week at the beach dancing Carolina shag. I went with a big group of dance friends, and we spent every night partner dancing to beach music. Here’s the catch: I don’t know how to dance Carolina shag. I know how to dance Lindy Hop. Put me in a room full of swing dancers and a jazz band, and I’ll dance to every song and have a blast all night. It turns out, though, that if you put me in a bar full of South Carolinian septuagenarians and a DJ playing R&B, I will...
12 days ago • 3 min read

When Should You Practice, and When Should You Publish?

Hi Reader, In order to write great books, you first have to learn how to write great books. But when it comes to writing, there’s always something more to learn. So how do you know when to practice your writing skills—and more importantly, when to publish the stories you’re creating? That’s the topic of today’s brand-new episode of Your Next Draft. In it, you’ll learn: 2 benefits and 1 danger of spending focused time learning new writing skills The joy—and risk!—of publishing using the skills...
19 days ago • 1 min read

How to Show Us Your Character Has Really Changed

Hi Reader, At the beginning of your story, your character believes something: about the world and about themselves. But if your story has an internal arc of change for your character (and most stories do), then there’s something not quite right about whatever it is your character believes. Somewhere along the way, they got something wrong. And if they hold to this false belief, they’ll never be successful in the challenges coming their way (that is, the really exciting plot you’re throwing at...
26 days ago • 2 min read

You Can't Skip Learning How to Write a Novel. Here's Why

Hi Reader, When I was fifteen, I got my learner’s permit and began learning how to drive a car. This made me very unhappy. See, I wanted to know how to drive a car. I didn’t want to learn to drive a car. Knowing how to drive a car was fun, freeing, and exciting. Learning to drive a car was dangerous, tedious, dangerous, difficult, and also dangerous. Writers, I find, feel the same way about writing great books. Writers want to write great books. They don’t want to learn how to write great...
about 1 month ago • 1 min read

Here’s What Happens When It’s Time to Ask for Help

Hi Reader, There comes a time in just about every major project when you need to ask for help. This is true for your book. And it’s also true for my business. (Stick with me here—we’ll come back to your book in a moment, I promise.) Last month, I reached an exciting milestone: I hired an assistant! After nearly a year and a half of solopreneurship, this is a big change for me. My assistant’s name is Lauren, and I’m really excited to have her support. I’m also nervous. Here are two fears I...
about 1 month ago • 2 min read

4 Tips for Your First Time Working With an Editor

Hi Reader, Let's be honest. When you start working with an editor for the first time, it can feel a little scary. You’re sharing your manuscript, the project you’ve worked so hard on, with a stranger on the internet. You’re inviting another person into a process that up until now has been entirely solo. And you’re entering an industry of professionals that’s probably entirely new to you. What should you expect? And what’s expected of you? In today’s brand-new episode of Your Next Draft, I’m...
about 2 months ago • 1 min read

Your Book Isn’t Bad. Here’s How I Know

Hi Reader, When I tell people I’m an editor, I get a lot of curious questions. (It’s a great fun fact to share at parties!) Here’s a question that comes up often: “So does that mean you read a lot of bad books?” I have SO MANY THOUGHTS about this. (I can derail the whole party with a rant about growth mindset versus fixed mindset.) But curious partygoers are one thing. The question carries a lot more weight when it comes from writers. Usually, they’re asking this version: “Is my book bad?”...
about 2 months ago • 1 min read

4 Tips to Find the Right Editor for Your Novel

Hi Reader, Working with a developmental editor can be the most rewarding part of your editing process. But if you’ve never worked with an editor before, it can also be . . . intimidating. Confusing. Scary. After all, you’ve got to hand your manuscript that you’ve worked so hard on to a stranger on the internet and hope their feedback will be helpful and not soul-crushing. If you’ve ever wondered how to find the right editor for your book— —or maybe you’ve worked with an editor before, and it...
2 months ago • 1 min read

What You’re REALLY Editing in a Developmental Edit

Hi Reader, There are four major types of editing. But in a way, there are just two kinds—developmental editing, and everything else. A bold claim, I know. But here’s what I mean: Line editing, copyediting, and proofreading are all about . . . Taking a piece of writing that's doing a thing . . . And making it do that thing even better. Developmental editing is about . . . Figuring out what thing that piece of writing is supposed to do. Let’s take a closer look: In line editing, you’re refining...
2 months ago • 1 min read

Alice helps authors of YA novels craft un-put-down-able stories with proven editing strategies and infectious love for the editing process. Get one expert editing tip in your inbox every week.

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